In humanities class, we had to make an iMovie about an ancient Egyptian pharaoh. My partner and I chose to do about King Tutankhamun (King Tut). Here's how I thought we did:
I think we had a good introduction about King Tut because we had a lot of background information including info about King Tut’s family. In terms of King Tutankhamun’s accomplishments, I think we did a good job because we wrote a lot about his tomb he built.
I think we did well with images because we had about 20-25 pictures. Our voices were clear and people were able to understand. The transitions in our i Movie were pretty good but we repeated some transitions.
| Content Rubric | | | | | |
| Introduction~ A description of the pharaoh is relevant, factual and correct. Time he/she ruled is correct. | 5 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 |
| Pharaoh’s accomplishments ~ Clearly explains the important contributions the pharaoh made during his/her rule. | 5 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 |
Architectural Achievements ~Clearly describes and explains the important buildings/monuments that were built during this time. Explain how evidence of their religious beliefs is shown in these buildings. | 5 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 |
Skills Rubric | | | | | |
images ~ All images are relevant, interesting and of good quality (saved properly as a jpg). | 5 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 |
| Narration ~ Voices are clear, loud and fluent with good intonation. It is obvious you have practiced your part before recording. No background noise. | 5 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 |
Transitions & Effects ~ Subtle transitions between the parts of the presentation are used throughout. Any effects used only enhance the message and are compatible with the image content. | 5 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 |
Total Grade: 27/30
They had a good introduction; they included information about the date Hatshepsut started her reign. There voices were clear. Sometimes I couldn't understand what they were saying. They told us how she contributed to Ancient Egypt. There was some stuttering between the sentences, and there were no transitions. I think they could have improved that by practicing more and adding those transitions to make it more interesting.
URL for there rubric: https://docs.google.com/a/iskl.edu.my/document/d/1BQ4Zsmuzde78QdQmRdq9YQ8FRWNyVNBa4bQVBYw7sWA/edit?hl=en#
The introduction is good; it tells me when Ramses II ruled. The information is good, there voices are clear, and the pictures are also good quality. The facts were interesting and they also told us how he contributed to Ancient Egypt and what monuments he built. I think the information was good and also some pictures didn't always match what they were saying, but for the rest I think it was good!
URL For The rubric: https://docs.google.com/a/iskl.edu.my/document/d/1p8mvbzX5JQYxaPIWk2TPz5LIJ4MKmjmdY6E1jVpF8RM/edit?hl=en#
The introduction was ok but I think they could have done better because there introduction is about Ancient Egypt and not Nefertiti. The introduction also doesn't include the time period she ruled in, and that's supposed to be in the introduction. There voices were clear but sometimes they spoke VERY FAST. The pictures were good and matched what they said but I think they should have added more transitions. Otherwise it was good.
URL for the rubric:
They had the introduction and everything about the date. They explained clearly how his greatest achievement was the Great Pyramid of Giza. The Great Pyramid of Giza also seems to be the greatest Architectural Achievement and that he might have made himself the Sun God "Ra". The pictures were slightly blurry. There were good transitions between their pictures so their video flowed smoothly.
URL for the rubric: https://docs.google.com/a/iskl.edu.my/document/d/1jUBWB66Ej0_K7LGHXi9wzC_xKPZwxrG9QwDN12EPGJs/edit?hl=en#
Here is my imovie video for King Tut:
